Youre good, that was funny.

That was hilarious.

i think u could've done better on spike's lines. a lot of t/ dialogue doesn't sound very much like him all. like "yup", for 1. i doubt spike would eva use that word. or "aw"

but it's pretty cute, othervise. just work on making spike mo spike-like

you should write a sequel to this. and you're right, he's just cute when he does that bickering. gets a bit hard not to mistake the two of them, though. 'specially when they repeat each other's sentences.

cuteness...:):):):):):)

How cute, I wish the wedding really does end up like this. I *know* there's something a-brewin' with the William references from Buffy and Hallie and the fact that Kali Rocha played Cecily and Halfrek. Spuffy forever!