Wow! This was extremely dark and well written.

Keye

Beautifully tragic. Well done.

Flawless. I bawled. This is how I know.

Good job with this perspective and possibility, guys...and ladies.

Love.

xoxoxoxoxo

I enjoyed the story. It did take me a couple of tries to finish it but I am glad I did. Almost ten years ago I knew someone who toke his how life. My other friends and I took it pretty hard.

all i can say is great job! you will be a great author :)

First of all *hugs Jadiona and Jacque* I am so sorry you had to go through such a loss. Now on with the story review, I loved it I think you totallly captured exactly what would of happened if things went the way you wrote it. Well done!

Barb

This was a very good story and im sorry for your loss. I know what it feels like i just lost my mother brother and my best friend last week. You are not alone