|Reviews for A Dubious Affinity|
| Mizz Nikki 9/6/10 . chapter 1
Wow, Awesome Story!
I really liked the plot and it's gonna be one awesome story. I really loved how you made Shinji so caring and protective of Satoshi while keeping him in character too. What happened to Brock, Dawn, and Pikachu though? Where they did they go and why is Piplup with Ash?
Can't wait to read more. Great job Erin and keep it up. I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter. :)
| kiba-dark 9/5/10 . chapter 1
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Continues been training the beginning, and I liked the idea of the story, I'll be waiting for the next chapter
| ReachingForTheStars 9/5/10 . chapter 1
Wow, Erin! The prologue was awesome!
This seriously looks like it's gonna be one awesome story. It's nice to see Paul so caring and protective of Ash. What happened to Brock and Dawn though? And Pikachu too? Why is it just Piplup with Ash?
I'm usually not a big fan of yaoi pairings but Comashipping is an awesome pairing indeed. I really like it a lot.
Ash: Why? What's so great Paul/Me?
Me: I dunno. I just think it's an awesome pairing.
Oh well, can't wait to read more of this story. Great Job and Keep it up! 8D