I love it, bb. I love the little bit of angst mixed with the happy ending-it's perfect. Perfect perfect.

I feel so behind! But I know that's because you published quite a few stories in quick succession.

First off, though, I want to say thank you for saving this as a birthday present for me, and I am really so glad you are sharing it with the comm because it's a great read and I hope you get a lot of fuzzy lovely feedback. What strikes me the most as I read this again is a combination of the colors and the descriptions of the colors, the language that's used with it, essentially. It's sharp and crisp and I just like it a lot. Thank you again :D

This is cute and amazing.

I love the use of art and the language in this.

The ending made me feel warm and fuzzy.

This is really good.

It definitely made me smile.

I imagined Rachel forcing Tina into making gold stars with her lol. This was very visual. I could picture a lot of it. I like the way you ended it with a glimpse at Artie's thoughts of her. As you went on, I wondered what if Tina does become a famous artist. She'll have a whole showing devoted to pieces about Artie after a breakup. Then Artie shows up. So I like that this story made me think of the possibilities with their relationships. This is dorky, but now the word 'artist' has a different meaning to me as in 'one who loves Artie'. I am lame lol.

this was great