I am officially intrigued by your story and hope to find more of it soon!

more?

omg, I thought when I was reading this, that it was complete. Oops, lol. Ohwell, you haven’t updated in awhile, and I was wondering if you planned on finishing the story at all. Well, if you’re not, could you please tell me what you had planned and how it would end? If you are going to finish, please do so:) um, overall, I thought the details on General Yoshi were a little fussy, although it was quite clear that Anna was Daniel’s wife, lol. The plot was getting along well. I really enjoyed Osiris’s threat to destroy the world with Jack’s knowledge; she is a good choice in villains. Anyways, I liked this story. Have a wonderful summer:)

I just found this story a few days ago. I hope you plan to add more soon!

I like this story so far you are doing a very ggod job.

I'm going mad.

WHO DID JACK MARRY! Please let it be Sam PLEASE let it be Sam.

I beg you!

PLEASE let it be Sam...

Oh good. Please put some Jack thumping in this, I love Jack thumping!

Intriguing start! I hope to read more of it soon.

Maea