|Reviews for One Last Night|
| starslopes 1/26/13 . chapter 1
This is seriously one of my favorite Phoenix/Maya fanfics. ;3; The way you describe their first night and the emotions and sadness that goes with parting is really lovely. (And you keep them in character, too!) Really great job. :')
| Shelley 6/8/12 . chapter 9
Oh. My. Gosh. THAT WAS SO ADORABLE. I really loved it. I've played all the games and I just wondered if Capcom had ever meant for there to be any connection between Phoenix and Maya. But I came here instead:3. I seriously almost cried at some parts. I wish they would have made them get together or form some kind of closure...but this is good enough! :)
| psykit 1/12/12 . chapter 9
If I've read this once, I've read it a thousand times. It's absolutely beautiful. I just needed to let you know.
| Madame Mush 12/25/11 . chapter 9
Just the right kind of darkness and angst for AJ:Phoenix, in my opinion. Just the right level of cute/awkward for he and Maya as well, to be honest! Was super satisfying to see them depicted like this!
Thanks for the awesome read!
| Justis76 8/24/11 . chapter 9
Oh wow, this was awesome. Somehow I managed to read through half of this before even noticing that you were writing, but I guess I should have guessed.
The narration was just so well done. It was sad (up until the end, of course), but I could definitely see Nick thinking all of the thoughts that were written down here, and all-around the characterization was excellent.
| TheSylverBlue 8/2/11 . chapter 9
I just stumbled on to your story, and it was just really amazing. Phoenix and Maya just seem so awkward most of the time and you captured them very well xD And the ending was quite adorable. This was a wonderful read! _
| Katamabob 6/3/11 . chapter 9
D'aww... I liked it :D Very cute.
| purplepjs 1/23/11 . chapter 9
Oh. My. GOD that was so deliciously angsty and gritty and seriously I'm overwhelmed.
Thumbs up, adding to faves.
You're so great at emotion - reading that, his pain hit me like a smack in the face. My heart hurts. Gosh, GS4 really threw poor Phoenix down a proverbial flight of stairs.
| Jelly pin 11/1/10 . chapter 3
I agree with the other comments. I just can't put my review into words very well.
What really happened between him and maya directly after the forgery case?
I think that more explanation is needed, bar the fake answer given to kristophe.
Doesn't Maya send him videos in appollo justice? Was it also implied that she actually met up with him?
I can't remember...
| Moonlitwater 10/14/10 . chapter 9
Such a lovely story. It was very emotional and heartwarming. Thanks for sharing this with us. Hoping for more stories like this.
| risenfromash 10/6/10 . chapter 1
My favorite part of this chapter is the description of Maya's lack of grace. Instead, you've made her level of exuberance attractive and I love that. One of my pet peeves is that so many authors choose to make Maya graceful as she matures, something that as an ungraceful gal myself who runs around in sandals most of the year and can not walk in heels makes me feel doomed to the "goofy chick" category. Seeing a clumsy, yet loving Nick and Maya should give all klutzy gals (like me)a reason to smile. :)
| starlingnight 9/22/10 . chapter 1
AHHH YOU PUT IT UP!
Totally didn't notice - haven't been browsing the AA section lately :3 Anyway, I'm just going to read through the whole thing again now. And favourite it.
Once again, great job. Very glad you put it up here.
| SylverStone 9/12/10 . chapter 9
This is a very well written story. Phoenix and Maya are so adorable together. I loved the story and I hope you write more like these in the future.
| red eagle 9/10/10 . chapter 9
Wow. When I first saw this on the KM, I never thought it would be uploaded here. Still great!
| iryna 9/7/10 . chapter 9