Nice idea, but there are a good few spelling and grammatical errors that wouldn't be there if you maybe proof read or found yourself a beta reader? Quite a nice little idea though. :)

Keep writing!

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...there were several spelling errors. The story itself was OK, from what I read, but you really really need to work on your spelling or grammar or get a beta reader because it was so distracting I couldn't read the rest. I don't mean to criticize you, but you need to proof-read.