:'( That was a very good piece...I was so sad when Anakin died. :( :( But you did a good job of portraying the emotions that the characters felt afterwards.

i hate the fact that the author killed him. he was my favorite charictor and had a future ahead of him. tahiri and him were ment to be. it's not fair.

Sage

That's what I think should have happened.

:( :( :( It would help if I knew who Anakin was, but hey! someone died, I get that part. And this is NOT Hayden Christensen, right? This is the other one. Sorry he died. Must be pretty awful, to have your brother die. She's taking it pretty well. That's good. Or bad, depending on which side of the Force you're looking at it from. :) Hanna

Very nice piece. I too thought that Anakin's death was dealt with too quickly in the book 'Star By Star'. Again, nice piece - I liked it.