| Reviews for Uncontrollable |
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imaferrari 9/24/10 . chapter 1I just watched this moving again today and this short fits it perfectly. Now, I have a request. I always wonder what happens with Simone and Annabelle when they are at the beach house. What do they talk about on the porch? What do they talk about on the beach? What happens between the time Annabelle embraces Simone after she reads the note to the moment Simone wakes up with Annabelle next to her? How about you write a short about that? I'd love to see those blanks filled in! :) Just a thought... |
Megan 9/23/10 . chapter 1 I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing it. I read pretty much all of the others and this one is by far the best. Hope to see more. |
Amy 9/19/10 . chapter 1 I love it! Please do more! |
Harley Quinn Davidson 9/6/10 . chapter 1its a good movie, except where they get seperated in the end, that was no bueno, great writting as always |
Alexawynters 9/6/10 . chapter 1loved it :) i think it accurately described what simone mustve been feeling |
MiguelCC51 9/6/10 . chapter 1This fic pretty much captures what I thought Simone was thinking then. This is a great fic for a great movie. |