ooooooh. love going against tradition? please update!

Great story but the end of that chapter has me depressed

I know you haven't updated this story in a long time, but could you please do it? It's killing me not knowing!

I looveee the idea. Its freaking awesome. PLZ,,, PLZ,,, PLZ continue the story and update. U've got a very good base and the starting is fabulous. The story has chance of being one of the best PJO fanfics. PLZ UPDATE.

plz plz plz plz update as soon as u can. is this a "he knocked her up mom ashamed finds out he makes her happy happy ending" or "he is frowned apoun and he finds out he is supossed to be well knone and every likes him happy ending." or my fav "she wants him talkes to mom,mom talkes with apratioy gets love potion,mom says he is not to clean but to pleasher her dauter,and he is used for sex porpeses all live happly ever after except him"

ive got this for u here

When i was in subway with grover talking about how i hated ketchup something growled behind us and attacked Grover.I couldn't stand there and watch my friend get torn to shreds so the stupid person i am i ran towards him. "Watch out" i yelled while jumping infront of him "come on then ugly" i shouted at the monster. Well that really wasn't the bestg thing i had ever said becouase that had got it's breathed fire at me! argh is said and covered my face with my arm but what happened was astonishing i had a shield of impenatrable water covering me. "What the HECK!" i almost cried

AYYYY UPDATE OR I SWEAR ON THE RIVER STYX I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN!

you should continue this story you have a really good idea I will glad to see a new chapter

Really Annabeth doesnot liv ein her mom's hat and never has I diot

Very interesting. Hope to see more.

lovee these 2 chapters...i wonder if Annabeth and Percy r going to get together even if Percy's mortal? plz update

This is a really interesting and different way to turn this story into an AU. I really like the way you've started to set up the story so far, and don't feel that Annabeth is ooc actually. Remember the way she reacted when she first met Percy in the series? So Sally doesn't like the gods in this universe...might this have anything to do with Poseidon? Please update soon!

Keep Writing! Loved it!

This story is so cool! I'm sorry, I do t think I've ever reviewed for this story and that's not a good thing. This story really is interesting. I've never read ANYTHING even close to what you've capture here. It's a very original idea. I always love reading those "guy falls inlove with girl" stories. Frankly there are too many stories out there that show the opposite. Where they have the girl fall in love with her best friend or a close friend or whatever. So kudos to you. Keep up the good work and please update soon!

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