I. Love. This. Story. Period. It made me laugh at the last part, because "Sodding firecrackers" is the best concluding line EVER.

I like your writing style in this a lot! :D The language you use captures the atmosphere perfectly. The imagery your words created was very vivid and I absolutely loved reading this. Thank you so much for writing it!

This was perfect. You captured them both perfectly and the writing was witty and well done!

I love the way this is written. It could have gone on much longer and I'd have enjoyed it to no end.

Hong Kong and England's interaction in this is fantastic. I like that you've shown Hong Kong with more personality than people usually give him. He's reserved, not unemotional, but that's just my opinion I guess.

Anyway, fantastic job!

Aw, that was a delight to read! Colonial!England is always a treat.

So very cute. And the description, the mood is very nice too :]

Thanks for sharing

JUST TOO CUTE. Loved it! :D I really love familial love between England and Hong Kong, ahh.

This was really well written. You're a great writer! :) Great job!

As a Hong Konger, I completely approve of your Hong Kong. :) TOO CUTE TO RESIST IN ANYWAY. And firecrackers. 3 Loved it! You should write more England and Hong Kong. :)

this was adorable! 3

i love hong kong, and especially in stories where england plays the role of doting dad :D

i hope you write more about them!

you definitely write hong kong wonderfully!

OH SO CUTE

I'm just a sucker for anything about England and my hometown, especially fluff. Don't worry about your writing of HK, he was perfectly adorable and mischievous, just how I like him.

Ok. Best thing I've read in a while. Though it wasn't eventful, it was definitely cute and sweet and all things good. And don't worry about whether or not Hong Kong was in character or not, because he was perfect _ this story is an instant fave.

This was too cute. -hearts-