ashley please write another you and i love jack but i can take gibbs please write on stranger tides with u and jack.

Awww, cute chapter. Can't wait to read more. :)

I love this sotry.

can't wait for more.

Hey!

Totally awesome story!It keeps you wondering what Ashley and Kate will do it! Plz update soon! xx

Please write more! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)

Good story! I read the other two as well ! Please update soon

very good though i expctd nothing less! Cant wait for the next chapter!

skinny. very very very very very very skinny. way to skinny. Make it fat please. its is though a pretty good story

Well writen, fun to read and everything! Not that I expected less, I knew it'd be great! Thx!

Calm winds and fair seas!

-BreeilnaBane The Apprentice

haahaa this is just awesome! i love ashley parts, but kates are bit boring to me. i missed the point where kate came in i guess. but yeaaa, continue? (;; what happens when you have finished this story? will you write fouth one? plz do, that would be just amazing! 3

awesome story. i luv ur chapters (; continue? :DD

yay! I'm so happy, I love this story, can't wait for it to continue! Keep up the good work

This is just the best! continue plz! (:

I still love it! Absolutly great! I'm not laying it on too thick am I? Oh, well, it's still really great. Can't wait for more!

Thanks a lot! I'm trying hard but school always gets in the way... hopefully soon!

Cheers!

-AshleyRoseSparrow