Yeey, a new chapter! I'm eager to know what Tear wanted to tell Natalia... And the ending... What will happen? I can't wait. By the way, I really liked the description of the spa. Thank you for uploading, I'll wait for the next chapter

being schooled about wedding rights three times in a single day..

Hey,

Long term follower. Glad to see you update. Nice development there. Can't wait for more.

I love the twist. especially a day before the wedding. Oh my! I wonder what will happen O.o

Oh finally you updated! I've been waiting for so long!

I enjoyed this chapter allright. It's very understandable for Natalia to have some issues with Guy's life in the past, and the politics make everything heavier. They show off your skills as a writer, actually :)

Good thing you updated today! If you'd published tomorrow, you would have missed me!
I'm really curious to see what Tear wanted to ask Natalia.
Hurry up with the next chapter!

Oh, Jeez. You aren't really going to have Guy do such a thing would you? I mean don't get me wrong, I love the plot twist. But I surely hope Guy doesn't end up as the true villain by the end of this. Even if he did I would probably still love this story by the end of it, but my heart would completely shatter into a billion pieces. I really hope his name is cleared, because I love him and this pairing so much!

Now onto the technical stuff. This chapter seemed like a little bit of a filler chapter and not a whole lot happened at first. It wasn't until the last paragraph or so did any thing truly important to the plot happen. That being said, I still enjoyed it and gave me something more chill than just constant drama chapter after chapter.

I have Read this story twice!... make it thrice!
I love how your writing skills makes it so believable its so interesting and makes complete sense.
You have to continue this ) and i cant wait to know more about who is after guy. :D

update pls!

I absolutely love this story and given that you have the time, urge you to continue! The plot is flawless and captivating with no spelling or grammar errors. Neither Guy nor Natalia are out of character and the rest of the original main cast are on point to a T. I love that you have OCs that are not central to the story. Many authors (including myself) write out an OC for a fanfiction and then in time they become the main character(s). I love that your OCs are not central to the plot, yet they are still noticeable and lovable. I also love the fact that you have a very suspicious character, but not so suspicious that it is obvious whether or not she is to be questioned. You don't unnecessarily repeat words or phrases and you put thoughts and scenes into such wonderful detail that I feel like I am there experiencing it myself. I am anxious to read about more Guy's assailant and his employer and how this case will pan out with the wedding so close to date. And though off topic, I also urge you to listen to the band Eyeshine. The lead singer is Guy's English voice actor. Happy writing, Friend!

I absolutely loved it! You made me fall in love with guy/natalia so badly!
i hope you update it soon :)

My! What a lovely story! I just love your writing skills! And the story is really well-made, yup yup. I really like NataliaxGuy, and the way you're developing their relationship is just wonderful! But it seems that it's been a while since the last update, and that's a shame :( I really hope that you could continue this fic, because it's getting pretty interesting and I'm sure that you have loyal readers waiting for updates as much as I do :) Well, I'm following the story to wait for updates! We'd really appreciate it! Bye bye

This story is superb. I'd be really glad if you continue.

Oh gods, you won't believe how much I adore this story.

From my point of view, you've got all that it takes to become a great author. Your plot is beyond nice, the characters are well developed, not to mention that you have superb writing skills that I'm very envious of.

This, as you must have heard it hundreds of times from other reviewers, must be the best Natalia-Guy fanfiction ever.

You describe emotions and thoughts in a very enthralling way; flowing, simple yet poetic at the same time. I simply can't fathom how the hell did you manage to write like this.

The only thing that makes me growl is that this story hasn't been updated...
Do you plan to continue? Because if you don't, I'll be sure to spam your inbox until you do.

You have writing skills equivalent to those of renowned authors!
Please continue this story! Dying to read the continuation!