That was so sadly perfect. Enjoyed it very much, even if it made me cry :)

Excellent story!! But even Ezra shooting the lawman is fixable believe it or not. I love it though. I especially love how you brought them together. So sweet. And it really is about time somebody told Chris he's not the only one to lose people.

Woof, that was powerful.. well written and I am noting a definite trend towards tearjerkers here...

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect

Damn. What a way to depress a person.

But great job. Wow. Powerful. And as much as I would like to read a sequel to this, nothing could really top the power of this piece. Perfect.

Wow! This was very powerful, very emotional - and very well written! Terrific job!

Wow, That was good. where can i find more?

the story was good, but hey i prefer my endings happy!!