Excellent. A short story, but an immensely powerful one. Loved it.

I. LOVED. It. IT WAS AMAZING AND I LOVED IT AND I HAVE NO IDEA WHY YOU HOPE J. K. ROWLING NEVER SEES THIS.

Wow, nice job. :)

:D loved it

Awe this is Awesome! poor harry :(

Excellent. I never understood the whole htinking behind the Potter stories. Oh, they are entertaining and a good read, but the logical flaws ... Snape's thought are well written. Thank you

Wow. I like this idea. :) Good job.

Your stats page must be a blast. :) You might never read this, and you might not think much of it anymore after the 61 that came before me, but I liked what you wrote and wanted to make that known.

Very accurate depiction of Snape. For all his bitter and sullen attitude, he's the only who has ever really see Harry for what he was: just a young boy who had no right for have the weight of the world placed on his shoulders. It leaves you wondering just who are the 'bad' ones in the HP-verse.

write new fics soon!

Very good. I've always enjoyed this type of story, the monologues, cause you get to see the inside of one person's mind and the rest of the characters are merely outside objects to be searched, figured out or ignored.

That sounds like our boy - virtuous, logical and sour!

Cool. I like.

this is a really good point that id never considered before and you drive it home very well i usually hate snape but that being set aside it is reallt an eye opening piece of work i thank you

Harry as the sacrificial lamb, how appropriate! Love the idea!