 GeminiMercedes 12/23/10 . chapter 3I like it, its funny :D Can't wait for your next update! |
 Araea Swiftwind 12/21/10 . chapter 3Darn you for ending the chapter in a cliffy! lawls. Anyways, this was another great chapter. I dig all the angst and such. I can't wait to read the next chappy. |
 Araea Swiftwind 12/21/10 . chapter 2OMG, that was super cute. I loooved it. There was only one place that had an issue.
About halfway down, there's a sentence that isn't finished. It's the sentence right before the line break:
"A nervous chortle escaped from Sora's throat. If Riku didn't think he was a loser before, he most certainly did now. And judging by his commentary, mad laughter and the accusatory[...]"
I'd really like to know what the rest of that sentence was.
3 Araea |
 Araea Swiftwind 12/21/10 . chapter 1Hahahahahahahaha...loooooved this chapter. Amazingly better than your first go...what, two years ago? Lawls. I adore this chapter. |
 ErinP Ur o so caring niece 11/27/10 . chapter 2 O MY GOOOODDDD! Write somemore!I love it sooooo much jaime. Im not going to rush u or anything cuz u have like 3 jobs and school work. I have no idea how that feels but sry its that way:) Love the story so far and hope to read more. Love u lots aunt jaime:) |
 Whimsical Dreamer 10/4/10 . chapter 2Omg, I can't wait for the next chapter!
I can't believe I missed this!
Please, update soon! |
 Sora and Riku's Destiny 9/21/10 . chapter 1"'Cookies 'n Cream!'"
omg i luv Sora now! lolz cookies 'n cream is my FAVORITE ice cream in da WORLD! o.o wooo! 3 3 Sora and Riku! 3 :D |
 Duo Maxwells Lover 9/7/10 . chapter 1Great job! I look forward to more. |
 Moore Loveless Plz 9/7/10 . chapter 1Jayden, I must say that all of your fanfiction is esquisite. I hope that Chronos M. has great work too because I need something to read again. I have always loved your work and will continue reading it until the end of time. C'est la Vie is very witty so far and has definitely kept my attention. I hope you continue this! And yes, I did lose the game! And you just did too.
Marcus "Loveless" Moore |
 anonimus 9/7/10 . chapter 1 i read all ur stuff. dis one iz da bestest! |
 vanilla strawberries 9/7/10 . chapter 1this story rocks! update sooooooooooon! D |
 cute-moomba 9/7/10 . chapter 1OMG! I love it so much! Please write more soon! |