Good job on your characters. They reacted very believably. Well done tale with just the right amount of suspense.

You should write more!

Amusing and awesome! I loved it! -had me rolling at parts-

For some reason I already find this highly amusing... wonder why?

Amazing.

I wouldn't mind reading those two stories, but what about finding out what could have happened between those two whilst once again under the influence of Snape's special brew...?

Lol.

This story was great though.

Thankingyou D

hahaha! I think they are both great ides, fantastic ending by the way! I very much enjoyed!

wowza, the boys are gone, nice chapter look at the teachers almost co-operating! we're so proud of them!

yay! this story very much makes my day!

yay! forbidden forest! without wands and with four people that could potentially kill each other without batting an eye!

you're my hero!

ah! that was a brilliant begining! I love it! great job! can't wait to read more, but I really need to sleep for school tomorrow

Good story. I like your style. You capture the characters' personalities well. Keep it up :)

really enjoyed this!

ja ne foxanbu

It wasnt bad, the fighting was well engineered and I liked Malfoy and Potter's interactions in the woods. When Draco told his goons to leave cuase he wasnt going to hug them...that was funny. As was when both professors gave Harry 10points off.

Knew it was orchestrated though, that much was obvious from almost the start. And I had acually thought what Snape did, that it was Remus..but Fang makes it far more amusing lol!

Also liked the incident with Neville especially when it got to the bathroom.

And the image of Snape with a wet cat is his arms is slightly disturbing yet slightly sweet too:P Lotta blushing going on there!

Overall though it wasnt brilliant.

lol.

This is such a fun story. Very realistic and yet riveting. Thanks.