Why, oh, why did it take me so long to finally run across one of the best written Lunar stories I've read in a long time? I absolutely adored the way the characters are written, especially the backstory of Nash, which was tragic, yet touching. I thank you for having posted this story and leaving it here for us slowpokes to catch up!

This is good! I like it! Really great here! A good fic! And great writing!

oh, scary! update. Soon. Please?

heh...this is good...verry good...

yet another good chappie... ke like! XD!

XD!

That was hilarious...even though I must admit the thought of Jessica kissing Nash is REALLY scary, but...

XD what a strange turn of events...I know I really shouldnt be laughing but... O_o anyways...um back to reading! ;

*meep* I ish scared...i shall keep reading though,...

NO! If those evil cult people hurt Nash, then I'll..*gr* ...uh nevermind.

Hah, not worried about Jessica, tho. I actually feel more sorry for the cult people who dragged her off...theyre probably gonna get their butts whupped,...

Hah, Nash is my fave character too. Yes, he IS hogging the spotlight in this story, but that's just fine with me... Keep up the good work (you might wanna fix the fact that the first two chapters are out of order, tho...)

this is good! Im gonna read more!

I love your story, You don't seem to find alot of decent Lunar storys on this site but your is top notch. I love the humor that you have captured between the characters. You must have played that game as many times as I have to know the characters that well. Please up date and finish your story. I really wanna see what happens.

I LOVE this plot you've got going here - very interesting and original (I haven't seen anything like it before, anyway). I hope you update this sometime if you get the chance!

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I just can't get over how much I love this fanfic! It is very good, and it is appealing for how unique it is. When do you plan on writing more? Soon I hope! I am telling all my frineds about this, and many other fanfics on this website, so you will be recieving many new reviews and fans soon!