 Whozonegirl 6/29/11 . chapter 21I have to addmit that at first I thought Noah was a girl, sorry but here that name is for girls! XD Also, I loved the fact of the different guitars, and also the mention of the "whokelele" hahaha, the sound of it relaxes me very much, that's why I like hearing it - Wow, I bet that hearing a song played by all of them together must be amazing! But wait, question and if you can answer, better: how in the earth do you get to play in your head this so long conversations, with answers and everything! That's what I admire from your stories! |
 Whozonegirl 6/29/11 . chapter 20Ouch! I don't know how many times I have repeated ouch while reading what tha f...guy did to Koa. I so would love the bullies got through what they do to the others! Just one day...Great job bro |
 Whozonegirl 6/29/11 . chapter 19Gosh man, I bet that if Vamp read this chappie these dyas, he would feel his heart touched... I've never liekd the fake people, specially those who buil sandcastles in your hurt and then kick them.
In other hand, I've never tasted tofu, (the name doesn't help me to think about it as something nice :p) I will taste it probably one day...but only once! |
 Whozonegirl 6/29/11 . chapter 18At last I got to FINALLY keep reading this story! Yet I shouldn't be doing it but...let's say I don't always follow the rules...
Anyways, good chappie, I still like how the dialogue makes it all easier, I should learn from you. But why do Koa and Mana are still new guys, can't you just simply add them in you stories?I mean, your characters are also in all our stories, it wouldn't be that bad right? |
 Whozonegirl 3/30/11 . chapter 17Oh I loved so much this chappie! It's super sweet :3 I'm happy that Austin and Seth have such a nice and lovely step mom... I don't regret having mine really, it's just...the lack of love that she has. I really loved this chappie, pretty cool w |
 Whozonegirl 3/30/11 . chapter 16Oh I liked the songs and I can say that I even relate to a couple of them, my fave? "The shadow of the day" fro Linkin Who :p hehehe Gosh, I wanted to review this chappie since long ago, just ahven't got time :p But well, as I always tell you, it's pretty nice to read the conversations between the characters, it's like if they were real, cool thing bro - |
 Whozonegirl 3/3/11 . chapter 13Yay! NOHA IS A NICE GUY! - :p
Uff! A juvie! Good thing for those jerks! Hey, nice chappie bro, I really like the fact that you write the converstions and all, still I don't know how is it that you write so much: are you a wizard or something? :p |
 Whozonegirl 3/3/11 . chapter 12Pam: Noooooo! Oh my dear Seth! Lucky that the others came before it was too late!
Wow, amazing chappie, you'revery good writting this kind of scenes.
Lehua: Yay! All that stupids will have what they deserve! Ha! Take that Horace! Don't wait to have you gurl back, and no other gurl! |
 Whozonegirl 3/3/11 . chapter 11Hahaha, this chappie really made me laugh when I read that stuff about the pillow, poor Seth, I just hope he didn't got angry at Austin :p Nice chappie, and wow, I so would like to have at least one guitar! But 12? :p They're lucky - |
 Whozonegirl 2/11/11 . chapter 10Ahhhhh! (girly shriek) Oh my gosh! It doesn't matter how many times I have read the part where Jojo shows his friends his observatory, I always feel the thrill again and this wasn't an exception bro! Nice chappie! |
 Whozonegirl 2/4/11 . chapter 8Oh I liked this chappie very much! Yes I know it's kinda simple and short, but it was funny to me seeiing how Mr. Zuckerman started to talk to the Mayor that easily ;p Sorry for lasting so much on reading :s |
 Whozonegirl 1/15/11 . chapter 7Oh noes! Those poor boys got it pretty bad!
Pam: Oh, somebody give them a big hug right now! Can I?
I don't know how do you write those hard scenes so well, I mean, even for me it's difficult to imagine such a violent thing!
Pam: I even had to storp reading it, it was too much for me. How I detest when people do thing like that, it's horrible!
Lehua: I would like to show those bullies how to bleed seriously...( takes out her knives from under her skirt)
Calm Lehua, I'm pretty sure that Animation will give them what they deserve! Grate chappie by the way! |
 lightfaith0606 10/10/10 . chapter 2Yah, Seth's not alone! X3 Those bullies are on my hit list. *scribbles names* Yah for you, A.U.! |
 lightfaith0606 10/10/10 . chapter 1...That Horace guy is on my hit-list... *scribbles his name on notepad* Aw... I feel bad for Seth. He needs a buddy. *hugs him* Great chapter, A.U.! |
 vampire1031 10/1/10 . chapter 21whoo that made my day so much better |