This was very good. I like Dragon Ball Z, and this puts and interesting twist on what Vegeta's childhood could have been like. Keep up the good work!

This is not literary dribble. You make a good point, without making Chibi Vegeta out to be some poor lost waif.

I like it! I know what you mean, it was sort of bittersweet. It was a shame that he wasn't encouraged to like beauty but zapping the bug did make him seem more like Chibi Vegeta to me!

weird but queit good..