So good!

Raw. Eloquent. Thank you.

Very sad and well written. Make a sequel with a happy end.

Wow this is a beautiful piece. Very well done.

Wahhhhh!

This is making me want to cry...

I love it!

No words... That was so sad, but so perfect! I only wish Bruce, Selina, and Helena could live happily ever after. \3

That was so sad! I think I had to blink back tears several times, but what a work of art! Really well written and IC til the bitter end.

Oh, my God, this is beautiful. Sad but very beautiful, you're a wondeful writer, Congratulations.

That was so good and sad! I would hate to lose a child like she did! VERY GOOD

Such a bittersweet story, perfectly told from Bruce's point of view. I agree with other reviewers, this is EXACTLY how it should have played out in the comics.

Thank you.

That's a great story. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. Congratulations, it's wonderful.

Por favor no me hagas llorar ,esto es tan triste, Dios es hermoso y triste.

A well-thought fanfic! I adored it and I found it extremely heartbreaking when she was telling him she had always wanted to tell him that he was the father but had chosen not to for his own sake. It was a beautiful story...

-missiebeautiful

This was a great story. It's how it should have been in the comics. I also think that Helena is Bruce's child and think that Sam being the father was just a cover. But I guess we'll never know unless they decided to do something with it.

As I said, I really enjoy your take on it. It was wonderful.

So cute! I loveed it!