|Reviews for Liloline|
| Anonymous But Interested 9/16/10 . chapter 5
Thanks greatly for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, great job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. No further suggestions for this story yet, but I'll keep thinking and I DO have four more ideas for "Blazing Starships":
1. At the appropriate point, the following exchange could tske place:
Spongebob: Great. Thanks, Wilbur Force
Fisk: It's not Wilbur Force, sir, it's WILSON FISK.
Spongebob: Ah, what the blazes are you worried about? This is 1874. You'll be able to sue HIM.
Fisk: (to the audience) Well, we HAD to find a way to make the "Name confusion" gag from the movie make sense.
(for the record, JusSonic, the name is a reference to an admittedly obscure comic strip)
2. (this is one based on a deleted scene found on the Blazing Saddles DVD. After the "candy gram" delivery, King Kong gives chase and spots a dummy with an attached microphone)
Dummy: (in Stitch's voice) Step right up, step right up. For a shot at shooting it out with the sheriff, please deposit a quarter.
King Kong: (deposits a quarter, only for the dummy to disappear and be replaced by a catapult loaded with an extra-large pie which hits King Kong right in the face) Banana cream. Kong's favorite. Still, Kong have to smash sheriif and Kong will.
Stitch: (disguised as a carnival barker) Ladies and gentlement, and giant gorillas, step right up for the opportunity to dive for underwater treasure. All diving suits provided for twenty-five cents.
King Kong: (hands the disguised Stitch a quarter and Stitch provides a diving suit PRECISELY his size) Impressive.
Stitch: What? That I could make a diving suit large enough for a fifty foot gorilla or the fact I can lift it without too many problems?
King Kong: Both. (gets into the diving suit and goes into the VERY large water tank, only to find no air coming into his diving suit. Stitch drops down a sign "Air costs twenty-five cents an hour). Of all the - (He gets VERY irritated and falls unconscious from exhausting what little air he has with his angry scream).
Stitch: Well, I think the big fellow has enough (pulls the unconscious King Kong out of the water tank) Now, to haul the big ape to the jail. (to the audience) Not bad, huh, folks? Brains AND brawn in one package.
3. At the appropriate point, the following exchange could take place:
Negaduck: Pretty much every felony on the list (and some I just made up), but especially rape, murder, arson, kidnapping, armed robbery, nuclear terrorism, stealing mystic artifacts, rape, murder and arson.
Fisk: You said rape, murder and arson twice each.
Negaduck: I like rape, murder and arson, fat boy. GOT A PROBLEM WITH THAT?
Rocky: This guy even scares ME, boss.
Mugsy: Yeah, he'd make a great addition to the gang.
Fisk: Agreed. Sign right here (Negaduck DOES sign) Badge. (Negaduck grabs the badge)
4. At the appropriate point:
Fisk: One ticket. (holds up a card) Err, Senior.
Theater Booth Attendant: Please, that might have worked for Mister Burns if he tried THAT in the author's FIRST Blazing Saddles fanmake instead of the "'student'" thing from the actual movie, but it's NOT going to work for you.
Fisk: Pain in the rump.
Theater Booth Attendant: Speaking of rumps, fatty, I'm considering askinjg you for triple-price since that rump of yours would take up three seats. But I'll be nice and only make you pay full SINGLE price.
Fisk: Just give me the ticket and cut the wisecracks.
Theater Booth Attendant: Whatever you say, porky.
That is, of course, assuming you like the ideas enough to use them when you get to the story. If not, I profusely apologize in advance and still look forward to more of your story as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
| Neros Urameshi 9/16/10 . chapter 5
Great job! Love the circus performance! But things aren't always what they seem, not even in Other World.
| NobodieZ 9/16/10 . chapter 5
Great chapter. Hoagie might be on to something. the next chapter sound interesting.
| Amber Pegasus 9/16/10 . chapter 5
I've got a bad feeling about this!
| acosta perez jose ramiro 9/16/10 . chapter 5
Again, good job.
Keep the good writing.
| NobodieZ 9/15/10 . chapter 4
Great chapter. Very informative too. I "Off the Hook" Joke from the Simpsons.
| Amber Pegasus 9/15/10 . chapter 4
this chapter let me guessing!
| Skullgal94 9/15/10 . chapter 4
Wow, very interesting. Great job and good luck!:)
| Anonymous But Interested 9/15/10 . chapter 4
Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter to this story up AND for liking another one of my ideas enough to use it. Both are greatly appreciated. Once again, great job on the exchanges, humor, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. No further suggestions at present, but I'll keep thinking and I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
| Neros Urameshi 9/15/10 . chapter 4
Good chapter, and I like that Simpsons Movie "you-laughed,-I'm-off-the-hook" bit.
| Anonymous But Interested 9/15/10 . chapter 1
No offense, skatoonyfan, but Jus has already done four fanmakes each of all three Aladdin movies. However, if YOU want to use Lotso as Jafar in an Aladdin fanmake of your own, you are more than entitled.
| acosta perez jose ramiro 9/14/10 . chapter 3
Keep the good writing.
| Amber Pegasus 9/13/10 . chapter 3
It looks like lilo's enjoying it for now!
| Nausicaa of the Spirits 9/13/10 . chapter 3
Funny that you mentioned Tai Lung as Bobinsky, because, coincidentally, Ben and I were gonna use Tai Lung as Bobinsky, given their same voice actor, but that's okay with us.
Speaking of Toy Story 3, I was so surprised that Bo actually didn't return. I was thinking, 'What happened to her?' until they mentioned a yard sale and then we see Woody looking sad, and then, I thought, "Oh." Update soon!
| NobodieZ 9/13/10 . chapter 3
Interesting. This other is a really nice place. But I have a feeling this "Other world." isn't all it crack up to be.