Well, that was a fine story. Thank you for sharing it.

Boom, there goes the robot, taking out a Lucavi and a half, thus saving the day. Well, mostly.

Elmdore is down and Cid is avenged, while Reis saves her beloved in a way that can only be described as TOTAL PWNAGE. As to Ramza, it's quite the dark homecoming for him.

With all the assorted and crazy shit going down in this chapter, it is Mustadio getting both twins macking on him that really sticks out for me. You the man, Mustadio!

Val's duel with her former master has to be one of the best magical battles I've ever read anywhere. Well done on that, especially how she ended up winning by non-magical means. And the way Weigraf just threw himself over and over at Velius in defense of Ovelia like that? Dude lost an arm and is still alive! He was one tenacious bastard.

Wow, Agrias, your timing sucks. Well, at least Zalbag and her have something to look forward to if they survive. Unlike Cid. Poor, poor Cid. I'm a little in shock that the biggest bad ass of the playable characters went down, but hey, if Thunder God Cid was to be taken out it might as well be by one of the other really bad ass characters. I'm hoping Gaff avenges his comrade in the coming chapter(s).

NOOOOOOOO, not Alicia and Lavian! No!

Hee, Cecil!

"One does not simply walk into Igros."
I LOL'd at that, I must admit.

I really enjoyed the exchange between Cid and the Queen.

Well this is impressive. I skimmed around to see if I should commit to reading it. One thing that I looked for was at the parts of Ramza's and Mel's developing relationship. I pretty much looked at all their parts and I'm not sure there is enough to make it valid. Their moments are rather short and, at least, we are not directly privy to how they act around each other besides small gestures and glances. What you do have is nice to see, like little rays of precious sunshine since they seem rare. I'm not exactly sure why she kissed him when he had her pinned nor sure of why he was attracted to her in the first place. Was it just her looks? I'm unsure.

Also, was Ramza possessing the chocobo at the end? That's the impression I got.

Took me so long to finish reading this story...glad i finally came back to it. There really are so few good final fantasy tactics fics...which is a shame really.

Anyway, your story was amazing...and it seems to be the birth, or rebirth?, of the sky pirates. Nice touch.

Hello!

Quite riveting story you have here, dear author!

Though, unfortunately, I wasn't able to take part in the review-in-the-making process, seeing as I've stumbled upon this fic only a couple days ago, I still wish to put my two cents in to let you know your effort is appreciated. Kudos!

There is a good deal of scenes and tidbits that will be saved in my personal Hall of Glorious Awesome on my hard drive, but if I were forced to choose one, I'd vote for Morrigan's first appearance. The sheer impact complete with sweet, sweet inevitability make it my personal favourite.

Good luck!

Yikari.

Something that came to mind over your OOC Agrias. How you wrote the scenes seemed really similar to FFT canon and that had her hating Delita so how do you explain your change. From what I have seen you write based on logic.

The AgriasDelita is annoying me. There are a handful of women that I only like paired with Ramza and she is one. With us knowing that Delita is also planning on seducing Olivia it pisses me off because the guy seems like a darker base for Suzaku. For Suzaku fans I don't hate him but some parts of his character just annoyed me. While Suzaku has his saving graces, Delita does not.

I am appreciate of the RamzaMel pairing though. Rare although FFT stories in general are. Thanks for the work on this and I hope you write some other FFT stories!