|Reviews for What if the phone didn't ring?|
| I am the Queen of Darkness 12/29/11 . chapter 1
Ohhhh man I've always daydreamed about if the call had never come in. :D It's cool to read somebody else's idea of what would've happened. I like that you made Simon a gentleman. I like it. :) good job.
| Nightcrawlerlover 7/31/11 . chapter 1
This is an excellent oneshot, as well as a great scene of what could've happened had Lorraine not called at that point in time. :) I also like the book The Silver Kiss, because it's a great book to read and be inspired by as well.
"I'll find you again.." he sat at the far end of her couch, readjusting his t-shirt and putting his jacket back on.
"and when you do.." she asked eagerly, sheepishly almost and he didn't dare look her in the eye.
His lips curled into a grin and he bit his lip.
"I'll take you like a lady." He paused to see if she were revolted but she only readjusted her own self, her heart raced once again and he kissed her hand goodbye.
Very intriguing and creative! :)
Keep up your super-neat, very brilliant and creative writing! :)
| BlackDove13 10/28/10 . chapter 1
Just wanted to say i loved the story. The Silver Kiss is one of my faves and I also had a lot of what if's about the book. :D
| GreenEyedGleek 10/9/10 . chapter 1
possible rate change? then make it a sequeal? btw, did it ever say if Siman was a virgan? because if he is he like a 300 year old virgan.