Wow, this was really good and sad. Really really sad D:

Poor Alex...he only finds some peace after he's been broken too badly and drugged up like this.

I'm guessing there's no chance you would ever considering writing a sequel or companion to this?

sad :( but so good

well, this is very intresting :)

too bad you never made a sequel! this was such an intresting story...but thanks 4 writing it! you have such amazing skills 4 writing,i'm surprised you don't have more reviews for such an amazing story! and great idea to have alex in a mental place, never imagined he'd actually end up there! but i give you brownie point for being creative XD

anyways, i'm gonna try to read all of your Alex Rider stories, ur a naturall prodigy at writing and i mean it! thanks again 4 writing such amazing stories! keep it up!

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Jesus.

I read this while listening to Brain Damage, and I was nearly tearing up.

I'll admit that Pink Floyd does always make me a bit emotional, but adding this to it was just... *sobs*

I like your style of writing in this, it's nice and detached which gives it that extra kind of depressed edge, which I adore.

So yeah, thanks for writing this!

Love, Little Miss Lover

That was a beautiful ending :) and I loved the storyline... and all of it aswell :D

Totally messed up, but I love it!

M

Can I just propose to you?

Jeesh, you've already stolen my heart, but now, you've stolen my soul.

Realistic, true to character, and ploy-amazing-please, if you were slender man, just come and kidnap me.

Brilliant Chapter. I loved the plot lines and descriptions. You were able to make the story seem realistic. Great work :)

Interesting story. Excellent job.

That was not a happy story...but a good one nonetheless.

wow. this was intense, and painful, but the ending was just beautiful- this tiny moment of peace after all that pain.

This story was really epic, i liked it a lot! Cookies for you!

\Ahh, it's just amazingly awesome... researched and cool.. agg, love it.

Ummm wow...

I don't know this series, but even so this story was absolutely heart-breaking! Very well-detailed and emotional despite Alex's lack of emotion.