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| Reviews for Last Resort |
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   Acro111 10/14/10 . chapter 2Awesome! Love the idea! |
| Acro111 10/14/10 . chapter 1 I see. Hmm I wonder who- DIMENTIO! |
| Boss-defeater451 9/11/10 . chapter 1 While this story sounds good, I have something to mention. After each symbol (for example, . or ,) you're supposed to make a space. For example... You wrote this: ... Bridget,Aiden,and Riley were at the botom climbing on the rocks that jutted out of the breakwater,and,Felisha... While it should be: ... Bridget, Aiden, and Riley were at the botom climbing on the rocks that jutted out of the breakwater, and, Felisha... Do you see? You had made alot of other mistakes, grammar and spelling alike, but this one happened the most. I hope you can do something with this information. |
