Wow, deep, dark and caring, I like it.

Wow. Great story. He can fix this... Pretty deep stuff going on here. But I must ask. Does he? Will he?

You may want to include a pairing/slash warning for your story to let your readers know what's in store for them. I had thought this a gen story myself, and those looking for slash may skip over this assuming it's gen as well.

Very powerful story. Wow! I need to go back and read it again as I'm sure I didn't get it all clearly enough the first time. Thanks for a story that really makes the reader think.