thats so sad and sweet! its really good!

OMG! I wanna cry now. That is so good but soo sad.

:( it's a great story

That was sweet!

the idea is sweet, i love the title, and you did a good job on it...but...you use the words "i mean" WAY to much, and the character that was supposed to be spike, does NOT talk, act, or have the "vibe" of spike...it's still VERY, VERY, VERY good! so keep writing you hear?

Awwwwwww