 Moongypsy04 5/7/05 . chapter 15This story is truely amazing. A bit faced paced at first but now totally perfect. Please update! |
 Jack.and.Jill.89 1/29/05 . chapter 15i know you wrote this awhile ago.. from reading the thing at the bottom:P but really its super good and you should definetly keep writting! it kept me amused for a good while anyways:P |
 D.Torres 10/2/04 . chapter 15A very interesting story thus far.
I hope to see more at some time. |
 mrsskellington 9/30/04 . chapter 15can you make any new chapters?
this story is really great, never read anything like it before (i really hope you can post another chapter) well anyways thank you for this awesome story! |
 Amscray 8/26/04 . chapter 15 A decent story you have here. Unfortunately there are a lot of holes in this fic. Starting with Ch. 15. 1) What exactly happened to Harry in potions. 2)When did Harry start avoiding Pansy. 3)Why did Ron all of a sudden, in Ch. 12 get so ticked at Hermione. 4)At the end of Ch. 7, I think Hermione was going to start to do something, but for some reason never followed through with. What happened?
5)Was that conversation about the situation what Harry was laughing about in Ch. 3?
Also I think you were a little too quick with getting the couples together especially when it concerned Harry and Ginny and their respected matches. The two should be a rather suspicious of the whole thing and of Draco and Pansy, I think.
Over all, I think this a good fic. I wish you the best. Keep up the good work.
Later. |
 arrrgghimapiratenow 7/30/04 . chapter 1this is good it is funny i like it so far |
 hpaddictedg 4/26/04 . chapter 2This is good. I especially like chapter two:D |
 Iced Mahina 11/18/03 . chapter 14That last chapter was really good. Update soon. |
 Ara Catin 10/1/03 . chapter 14Ek! Let Harry be okay! Ek! Poor Pansy! Poor Ginny! Poor Draco! Wait...I thought that you shipped Draco/Pansy! Anyways, I love the suspense in this chapter, and keep up the awesome writing! |
 hereforthenews 8/4/03 . chapter 1AGH! I love this! |
 dracosgurl 7/25/03 . chapter 14 next chapter? |
 stabthesky 6/30/03 . chapter 14aw... poor harry and everyone else. y wont ginny and draco just kiss and make up? and ron and hermione are realy cute. harry and pansy is kind of weird though. update soon! |
 freyliskat 6/30/03 . chapter 14OMG PLEASE LET HARRY BE OK LOL srry story seems like real life only your like transformed in wiht the characters isn't it kool when it's like that |
 eth 6/30/03 . chapter 14You are good! I like the way you develope each of the relationships. Very nice. |
 Ara Catin 6/27/03 . chapter 12*grumble* They're not cooperating. |