Thank God! Somebody who can actually write a coherent sentence! Somebody with a grasp on character! Somebody who can contruct a beautiful little vignette and step away!

Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!

Mmm, I like it, I think it captured Faye in character better than mine, "You're Going to Carry That Weight" but, to each his (or her) own, I suppose. Yes, I can see Faye thinking along these lines, trying to figure out exactly what goes on in Spike's head, trying to summarize what another person does and why isn't something that can be done really, though Faye has certainly gotten some of it in her. She and Spike are very much the same, she knows more about him than she knows about herself, I believe. Two lost souls, aimlessly wandering the stars, searching for love and the thrill of life, one trying to both escape and embrace a dream, the other just trying to find herself. Their paths, their destinies, are inexorably entwined ...if Spike shared the same blood as Vicious, he shares the same spark, the same bit of goodness within as Faye has. Anyways, lol, I didn't mean to blabber on *sweatdrops* but ...yeah. Wonderfully written, very 'Faye', and I hope to read more by you soon. Much appreciation and praise,

Hugs, kisses and sweet *day*dreams ~ Aldrean Treu Peri, Neo-Moon Guardian ~

See you, Space Cowboy!

I love it. Very in-character for Faye...I could hear her being crass and angry...and then at the last...her voice is soft. Bravo!

Very, very, nice. The words flowed together nicely and you captured Faye's voice perfectly.

Ooooh, nice perspective, very like Faye. Good story. =^_^=