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Miri W 8/10/11 . chapter 2
... *nosebleed*
CharlieBrownLover21 7/9/11 . chapter 2
This chapter was really funny. I liked the end when Blue is wondering why he came so much. ROTFL. And your LEMON scene, though it was short and sweet was pretty good if I do say so myself. Well, I enjoyed the whole chapter.

Blue is STILL ugly.

Please update soon! :D
CharlieBrownLover21 7/9/11 . chapter 1
Haha, I remember the beginning of this story. The end is super-duper hilarious and I totally would shank that cow if it ruined such a perfect moment for me! Nah, I'm just kidding, Charlie-Sama loves cows! :D

Blue is ugly.

But great chapter! :)
GintsukiKyu 7/9/11 . chapter 2
Nice fic so far I'll be waiting for next chapter.
Poke-Moon 6/30/11 . chapter 2
OMG I absolutly loved it! I wanna make a BlueXTina fanfic too but I think the name Katrina is way cuter on her than Tina :P But heh, blmae Natsume for the names. You should totally update more. I really wanna read more, seeming that it's the only BlueXTina fanfic I can find - -" But haven't you noticed that Blue and Gray (From More Friends of Mineral Town and DS Cute) look the same? I swear they are brothers x-x Anyway, an AWESOME story so far. I love it! :D
CoonTail13 6/20/11 . chapter 2
i have an idea for the 'scene' Tina and Blue should be at like the lake swimming and Blue's trunks come off when he jumped in and you can take it from there... and the last chapter was more of a lime than a lemon so update soon!
Lunabellla 4/11/11 . chapter 2
Hahahahaha! How DID that pillow get down there anyway? I hope there's more. I'm such a pervert. _
SleeplessNightmares 4/9/11 . chapter 2
This was really good tons of detail!
xXx Tinkies xXx 4/9/11 . chapter 2
Excellent chapter! Keep up the fabulous work & please continue immediately, a.s.a.p.! _
xXx Tinkies xXx 9/19/10 . chapter 1
Wonderfully cute story so far! Well written, too! I can't wait to read what happens next, so keep up the fabulous work & please continue immediately, a.s.a.p.! _
BloodRoseStone 9/12/10 . chapter 1
lawl

the cow mooed.

but does it stop their kiss?

i wish i married blue, but i hav the wii version so i only hav the boy character...
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