CONTINUE. please! don't leave this to die!

Come on! IT IS GOOD. I like the title. a coffin right? hmm.

AnYwAy. Keep. Write. Ing.

I really enjoy the riddles you give the Riddler. Although I have to say, you really left us hanging with that last one...

"What time is it when an elephant sits on your fence?"

Time to get a new fence? That's the only answer I can think of, haha. Is it the Riddler saying that his assumptions about Bruce were wrong and "squashed," and so he had to build his image of Bruce and Batman from the ground up?

Anywho, good story and I can't wait to see where it leads!

I can imagine his face when he figured out Bruce was Batman. It mustive been a "duh" look lol.

Oh, I see. This is the current status quo, where Bruce is dead and all that?

Stuff’s getting interesting here. I’m excited to see where you’ll take this. It’s definitely an idea I haven’t seen before.

...The elevator doors slid closed beacause Batman was Bruce Wayne?

XD

I loved how you wrote 'Batman was Bruce Wayne' instead of 'Bruce Wayne was Batman'. It shows that Riddler knew the Bat first and he gave Nigma a bigger impression.

It's interesting, and I can't wait to see how it continues.

Update soon!

This beginning... shows promise. I do get the feeling that Eddie is going to need to investigate his client just as much he needs to investigate Bruce Wayne.

Always a treat to read a Riddler story on here. I really like his barely repressed true self. All the thoughts he tries to paraphrase, that vague feeling of knowing something, that hint of something more.

The fact he recognizes his client, even if he isn’t someone who’s regularly in the limelight, really shows his smarts. You get the feeling he really does try hard to stay aware of everything important going on in the city. Very nice.

I’m looking forward to seeing how this pans out.