M, it was good, I guess, considering the whole lesson thing. The end seemed a bit rushed though.

I KNEW I SAW YOUR NAME BEFORE I STARTED WRITING IN WILD ARMS! _
I read this a long time ago. I will admit, it's not one of your best works, but it's still awesome! _ Then again, which of your fics isn't? (I haven't read them all, there are so many!)
Wow. I knew your name looked familiar. I was quite surprised when I found it in star ocean... Hm... Amazing...

Personally, I don't think it's too bad. Just a little shallow... oh well. It's a school assignment thing, so don't worry 'bout it.

For the most part its a good story, but coudnt Claude get rid of at least 2 or 3 Kolbolds? HUH!HUH!HUUUUUUUUUH?

AAAWWW!Cute story!But a big Lol about Claude mentioning ,he's handsome but sometimes he needs to watch what he says.(Or get a new voice actor, whichever comes first ).