|Reviews for The One|
| Sixty Five Roses 10/24/10 . chapter 1
I love the punchline!
I loved the entire story. You're really gifted. At the point his mother told Linds that she was pregnant I really laughed. It seemed very comic and I loved it. It was precious and it made me smile. Thanks for the lovely story.
| Boranza 10/11/10 . chapter 1
Thank you very much for your psi factor fan fiction. It is really good to come across something new. Keep them coming. Your english is pretty good, just a couple of words in the wrong order. Or sayings that have not translated so well from German. Very enjoyable reading though. I'm not sure if you can reply to this but I am happy to help with any translations.
-22F from New Zealand