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IrishUnicorn 6/10/11 . chapter 15
A woman tying a man's tie is one of my kinks, so that was an adorable scene to read. The rest of it, Jack's grieve, resting his forehead against hers, her final words to him, her faith, is what makes this a really beautiful and emotional read.

Thanks.
Yas 6/9/11 . chapter 15
Omg! Nille that is absolutely magnificent! U can see that moment so clearly between them. Your writing just as it always is captures them perfectly and sends goosebumps all over my skin.
MorningGlory2 6/9/11 . chapter 15
awww I loved this one :) I was so excited to see this in my inbox! This is beautiful, and shows their bond. I love that she does his tie and he is nervous and afraid to show it.

"When he finally looks at her, eyes shining with tears longing to be shed (a wounded young boy, still waiting desperately for his father's acceptance), her heart constricts painfully in her chest." This touched me particularly, I feel like it really covers his relationship with his father, always longing for acceptance, never knowing he had it, the words never said. You convey so much in such a short drabble, so many emotions captured. Wonderful job here. :) I needed some Jate today, and you gave it to me. Thanks :)
MorningGlory2 1/4/11 . chapter 14
This is beautifully and very sad. To be tormeted by a nightmare is terrible anyway, but to be tormented by one that may or may not be true...heartbreaking. You have such a great skill in writing, I love to read these. Really great job!
lucky-fin 12/5/10 . chapter 14
I love this so much. Whenever I'm feeling Jatey, I come read a chapter of this. Chapter 14 was awesome :)
IrishUnicorn 12/2/10 . chapter 14
Guh! This one is just...so very beautiful. Gorgeous imagery. Love that Kate is his light, but that she still can't quite quell his fears. (Even if she doesn't know what's happening.) I'm assuming it's kinda like he's pull to the island. No matter how much he loved Kate, his destiny always had that choke hold on him that pulled him away from her, even when he didn't necessarily want to be. Or I'm just probably reaching with that comparision. But either way, this was very lovely. And I just absolutely adore the way you write Jack.
Jimelda 12/2/10 . chapter 14
Wow, fantastic update. Loved the imagery and descriptions you used in this; very vivid! :D
Cinzia 12/2/10 . chapter 14
awwww loved it Nille. I call these drabbles my Jate pills LOL
andrea 11/27/10 . chapter 13
sooooo sweet! all chapters!
Javajive 11/26/10 . chapter 4
Just dropping by to say excellent writing! I especially like what you do at the and of each little chapter. Nice use of small everyday details. It makes for a really great read, cheers java
franci 11/26/10 . chapter 13
"Better than I have in years."

AWWWWW *melts to a puddle* I love how u write them soooo much *_* keep the drabbles going,you are doing a fab job! (even with the other fic,u know i'm addicted to longer fics,loL!)
Sara 11/25/10 . chapter 13
AMAZING! i love the way you write!
Jimelda 11/25/10 . chapter 13
Cute! Love this chapter, it is waaaay too adorable! :)
BlueDream 11/25/10 . chapter 13
Wanted to be a 100th reviewer ;) Im at work right now, boss still hasnt come, so Im on the net, but pretending to work and playing it cool, but now I read this drabble of your and cant stop giggling and grinning, so if I get fired, Ill blame it all on you, my Jatter buddy ;D Beautfiul drabble. So homey and so...Jate. I can imagine their mornings together. p.s. Can you do one when they go skating? (no pun intended :p - I meant ICE skating)
SoFeelingTheLove 11/25/10 . chapter 13
oh, that was so adorable! totally loved it!
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