I like your way of writting but I think you should really stick to the charcters.. if you know what I mean. Sookie wouldn't quite act this way...

Thank you for sharing your story. I'm happy to have found it. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters. I love the plot and the juicy lemons are hot! Sookie is so bad and naughty doing the deed with Eric on top of Bill's grave stone ,lol. Please keep going. I love how well written it is. TWO THUMBS UP! :D

OK SO THAT WAS SUCH A CLIFFHANGER! I LOVE IT THAT BILL SAW THEM! I WANT ERIC TO RUB IT IN BILLS FACE SO BAD I DIDNT LIKE THE PAM AND ERIC SCENE THOUGH :( I DONT LIKE IT WHEN THEY ARE INTIMATE I THINK ONLYN SOOKIE AND ERIC SHOULD BE! I SOOOO WANT TO SEE ERIC GET TURNED ON BY THR HALLOWEEN COSTUME SOOKIE HAS ON I CANT WAIT FOR THAT LOVE SCENE GOOD OL DOMINANT ERIC! PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!

Interesting choice of costumes for the 3 of them. Quite funny. Now who is with Bill?

Eric, Sookie and dining room table...I can't wait for Bill to get back!

I love this story so much! You already knew this.

"Bitch... Bitch and ass sitting in a tree k-i-s-s-i-n… " You are hilarious! I can't wait to read more.

Looking forward to see where this story goes.