I reviewed your Cloverfield story today, and I've been checking out your pages on youtube and deviantART. The more I see of your 'fanfiction' work here and on other sites, the more I think you're deliberately being shite at it for trolling purposes. You cannot be for real. You're doing this for shits and giggles. Oh, look how we're all laughing here(!)

I'd understand your grammar and spelling issues if English wasn't your first language. But I know full well you're from the UK - therefore, you should bloody well know better.

So, to conclude. I think these fanfiction stories you keep writing are deliberately shite, with deliberately shite grammar and spelling, and deliberately shite plotlines - because you want to cause a reaction.

Well done you, because you've certainly done that. But you also make a mockery of those who really DO have a talent for writing. You should be kicked off this site for your unreadable stories, and your obvious delusions of granduer.

I LOVE THIS STORY 8D YOU RULE

You defiled Batman. Also, is English your second language? I have never heard of a menchman and I've never heard of something being killered. Please at least attempt to find the spell check button - truly, it's not that hard.

wtf is wrong with you? I've never read a story as bad as this. And learn to speak - or at least write - English!