I love your story. Please update soon! :)

Interesting ending.

I think it's too late for Morgana in canon. If Merlin had disobeyed Gaius from the beginning and told her of his powers, sort of taken her under his wing, then I think she could have been different. But she's too close to her sister now.

I actually can't see this episode being too different if Merlin's going to keep Arthur out of it. But perhaps if he lets him know what's going on...and took him to see the dragon...?

Ohhh! Becoming more and more interesting by the chapter! I really enjoy reading this, very good job on writing it.

Hey there! Its been a while, hasnt it?XD Well I loved it! Especially when Arthur was conforting Merlin, because seriously, that boy is keeping too much inside:( ,also I loved when he saved him from the fire:) ,the ending converstation between him and Morgana. And the ending! Gasp! Where is Merlin going? Will the Great Dragon forgive him? I wish Arthur would go with him...

See ya in the next!:D

Woah, that was fast! Yesterday I didnt have time to review this so I though Id do it today, and here I find a surprise! Thank you Flash!D

Really liked it, especially Merlin and Arthurs scene at the beginning. As soon as I read the next, Ill review it.

See ya really soon!:)

Yay - can't wait for the next sub episode. I like the way you are getting Merlin to apologise to Kilgharrah. He seemed a bit uppity when he demanded the dragon to do his bidding in the episode, that's not the Merlin we know and love at all. Keep on writing!

Hey, great stufd that you got here. I am really enjoying it and you really keep them in character imo.

Keep at it :)

Wow. You are as eloquent and superb a writer as always. You have taken upon yourself an enormous task, and are coming through on it beautifully.

I love how this isn't just another "Arthur knows" drabble/oneshot/(shorter)multi-chapter. You keep going. And going, and going. I hope you don't burn yourself out!

By the way, I read chapters 12-23 in a single day. Instead of doing my homework. So while those were in many ways the best 3-ish hours I've spent in weeks, I blame you a bit for getting me behind on my work, lol.

Keep up the *amazing* job!

-Wildmage

Amazing few chapters! That was such and intense episode and right after I got done watching it I came to read this. Excellent job!

Shrine

That was great! Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Morgana turns good...

Sweet chapter.

OK, I still am not able to watch the episode, blast it... BUT is Uther really her father? Ha! Too bad for all the MorganaxArthur fans out there!

Wait. Did Merlin really say... that she didn't deserve this? On the contrary, Merlin, she QUITE deserved it... I decided this somewhere in between the smirking and the chains and the scorpions and the undead army...

THEY GAVE IT BACK TO HER? WHAT? C'mon, yall, she's EVIL. I know you ppl haven't read the legend, but Come. On. She can get her own dagger, so dont make it easier for her!

Now that I've finshed ranting at your characters... Very good chapter, I love the way you throw in Liam here and there.

Once again, I love this :) It's brilliant! I loved all the little twists and such with the altered scenes (I love Arthur and Merlin in this!), and I can't wait to see what this sub episode will entail :)

awe... slight cliffie... oh well, i love the way you changed things in this chapter, it was a great read, keep up the great work!