 Koshivuh 10/15/11 . chapter 1Amazing :] Your writing is so unique, I love it. |
 darkbutterfly2011 3/13/11 . chapter 1loved it freaking awesome |
 wendy1969 3/10/11 . chapter 1HOLY SHIT!
Please let Jasper teach dance to everyone. |
 Anisah Pinky 1/16/11 . chapter 1wow...you just broke my jella cherry. |
 chavamirjam 1/13/11 . chapter 1Shame on me I didn't review right after I read it. It's been a while. But probably I was simply speechless, because this was HAWT! xx |
 reluctantreader 11/29/10 . chapter 1Hahaha! I feel like this Bella's brain was the twin flame to my own. I mean, "Score one for preparation" is just something I would say, without a doubt. Plus, you also have the word befuddled in there as well...
I don't know how to say this, but...
I promise to love you everyday of forever. Will you do me the extraordinary honor...
wait, no, sorry, I meant to say that you're awesome for this and congrats on the second placed victory! it's total win in my book.
Tay |
 RyainDrop 11/14/10 . chapter 10.0 |
 Gemgem020507 11/12/10 . chapter 1Flash Dance the porno...love it LOL |
 XxXpeace-love-twilightXxX 11/1/10 . chapter 1Love this! Love your stories, especially bellas dirty notebook that one makes me laugh! My fave story on is dodgeball I love that sooooo much its so cool and witty. Write more stuff about bella and jasper pleeeaaassseeeeee? TY x peace out... |
 ColourmeCullen 10/30/10 . chapter 1I'll admit, I have no idea what the Dougie is, and I don't want to know after reading that.. lol ;p |
 AnonymousRandomStranger 10/24/10 . chapter 1 You know,I caught my boyfriend singing this shitty song, and then I saw this on FF...My god, you just made up for all those days of his singing! *blows kiss* I would grope you, but right now, said "singer" is reading over my shoulder...and is looking horny. He read this with me. ;) |
 KareBear1965 10/18/10 . chapter 1hot girl hot...
Hugs |
 Alby Mangroves 10/17/10 . chapter 1I had to go look that up on youtube. I'm not sure if I love you for writing this lovely, cute and funny O/S or hate you for making me look for this song! Goddamn, that's a hot Jasper :) |
 XxasiacullenxX 10/16/10 . chapter 1I agree Jasper would look delicious doing the dougie
Lol. |
 CharliDenae 10/15/10 . chapter 1OMJ! Hilarious! The beginning is so funny! I LOL'd - good thing no one was around - and, of course, I had to watch the damn video... yep! the song is stuck in my head... thanks for that! Not!
The middle was cute as hell! Jasper was so cute when he apologized and she had to forgive him.I loved how they were both blushing and then connecting, talking for hours, arguing over silly things. Really sweet and just perfect.
The end was seXy! Damn! I want to find that dance studio! I'd even put up with the song to take lessons from Jas! *hubba hubba!* I'd even let him rip my 'stretchy pants things'! Hee hee!
Wonderful one-shot! I haven't read all of the entries for the 'Teach Me the Nasty' contest, but I'm leaning toward voting for 'The Dougie'! ;o)
-Even though that damn song is probably going to be stuck in my head all weekend!
Good luck, tiffaninichole!
Charli ;o) |