Interesting story. Nicely done. Terrorsaur is one of my favourite characters. I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder if Scorponok is already a vampire. Keep up the excellent work and update soon.

I can't believe that you've gone and started again, Shocks... I never intended to make more work for you, not by a long shot. The original was most definitely up to par, if you don't mind me saying; your writing has always been good, and Savior was one of your best.

That said, you've obviously pulled out all the stops here, and it was with a deep sense of pride that I read the dedication, then the story itself. You've done a wonderful job, sis, deliciously dark and haunting, just the way it should be. The thoughts of the predator as it stalked poor Terrorsaur were excellent, and the attack, followed by the predator's destruction at the hands of Inferno and Waspinator, were very well described.

I'm looking forward to re-reading this story, my friend, and seeing where the story ends up. I'm going to wish you luck with this again, my friend, and give a great big thankyou (hugs) from the very bottom of my heart. You've got one very proud big brother here, unofficial or not :)

And now I'm gonna go read it again!

Your friend and FFBB,

Blue

Excellent set-up. Looking forward to seeing more.