Oh my god...that made me cry.

It was beautiful...and tragic. I love the part that starts like this: "There are no walls anymore and she likes this much better..." Especially this: "She doesn't like the sun because it gets in her eyes and gets into her soul and suddenly she's burning up and there's nothing to do but sing and sing and sing until it goes away"...insanely beautiful, simple, very Lucy. You've really gotten into her mind... I just wish Sweeney hadn't killed her. Lucy was such an incredible character. 3

I really liked this! very good writing!

I find it kind of funny how I was listening to the final song right as I read this.

I enjoyed this, even though I really don't like Lucy... This gave me a different approach to her character, though. I appreciate it, and you, for lessening my hate, haha.

Wonderful job.