I'm being polite and reviewing. So please be polite and UPDATE! I dislike unfinished endings. It's rude.

This story is...different...but it's good. Please write more!

have ya given up? meh.

wow, this is a pretty good story and it has the potetial to be even more funnie! and i have to note, that the scenes with Goku in them are AWESOME! i had to just about choke myself to not make any noise - it's 4am, my family's asleep. anywho, try to get the next chapter up soon!

sam

stupid p.o.s. wont let me sighn it, ne way GREAT FICCY ASHLY! i think sephy will hurt u, ne way keep up good ness work babai!

I love your story make a chap about why dende went to a strip club

this is mad funny write some more

this is mad funny write some more

*blinks, chuckles* now that was amusing / /. I'd like to see more sometime. *glomps Dende-chan*

hey ashley, you finnally updated! Wow! im surprised by you just doing that. But it IS a good fic. I almost didnt believe YOU of all people wrote it. LoL. Jk. nice job! update SOON!

Can I say something to you?

Don't dare put videl in a story!

That girl dosen't deserve to be in dragonballz!

Hello! It's pretty good, I can't wait for the rest! Keep writing. Ahem...lol. GOOD JOB!

Cool , Ash! Me like! Did you read my fic TheDoubleDatingGame? (free advertizing _)Any way I love your fic and cant wait for the rest of it! See ya!

geez, what did thier house ever do to you?

nah, I'm just kidding! it was heaps good

I like it, so if you email me when you up date, I'll email you.

ja-ne

Z

THis is pretty funny so far. Hmmm.. I never knew they celebrated St. Pat's day in Japan. Oh well. Great fic. Keep writing!