Alex cant Die :(
this chapter might have been short. but it was extremely intense! Cant wait for the next chapter!

'In my left pocket...a ring...please, take it to Eliza and tell her what happened... Tell her I love her.'
DON'T TALK TO ME EVER AGAIN! YOU BROKE MY MORISA HEART!
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I still hate you. I mean, the whole Alex thing is really intense and shiz, but DUDE! MY OTP! This chapter might have been short, but it was great because of everything and- SOBS! MORISA! ;w;

Yeah, enough about that anyway. Sorry, I just freaked out when I read that. I'mma go now...

...Alex can't die! TT nuuuu! I cried D:

You know.. The ending was suspiciously similar to the KoR bad ending..

Isabell must have been gripping the idiot ball REALLY HARD when she decided to rejoin the God-Generals. Anyone could easily predict that Isabell fighting for the God-Generals again would only result in tragedy, and this chapter is the resulting tragedy. However, I am quite confident that you already have some form of deus ex-machina prepared to save Alex's life.

Oh, my God. I feel like my heart stopped for a beat at the end.

Horribly fantastic chapter. You fooled me with the title. Now I need to go stare at my monitor blankly for a while because of this cliffhanger.

0.0 *my heart stopped on that last sentence* Your right, i do hate you for this cliffhanger. *dies on the inside*

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

One of the greatest ToA fanfic I've ever found! Great story! I just found your fanfic a few days ago, and I finished all 53 chapters in just 2 days. I love Alex and Guy's relationship, so romantic! And please, don't stop writing it. I really love it. You wrote 53 chapters so far, it will be a shame if you just end it right there. You've come too far to give up now :) Oh, and if you're really planning to make a serious change in the plot, if it's possible, can u please keep ion alive? I feel so sorry for the little guy T.T Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! I'm rooting for you *cheers*

Great chapter, I couldn't stop reading. I really look forward to the next one, and the changes you have planned. I wonder what's going to happen on Alex and Jade's end?

I do wonder what kind of new changes you have planned for the story, can't wait to see them.

OMG YES THIS WAS UPDATED! I wanted to read it sooner but there was tons of drama in my life. Drama good in fiction, not in real life. *starts story*

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This was so good i couldnt even stop reading! I hope ion lives! Maybe anise dies (yessss!) Please write more soooonjnnnn!

Awesome chapter, and I'm super excited for the next one an the changes! Update soon, and I might be interested in your contest. :]

Guy might need to break out his Brilliant Overlord Mystic Arte to take down that dragon.

Omg I cannot wait to read the next chapter! It's gonna be good :D Oh and as official Mieu inspector I would have to say you passed for this chapter XD I really liked Guy's POV and how he sorta went back to his phobia when he saw Mary and Alex tried to comfort him. Oh I also liked Tear's POV too, Guy's was really good but I think that's biased because I like Guy so much XD I had more things to say . Well at least I got this review done on the first night it was posted instead of last time XD