You know, this is pretty good! Keep going with it! :)

More more more more more xD

great story, i love how you potray gray. he is very sweet in here c:

that was a great chapter. i love stammering gray xD

looking forward to the next chapters ;)

PLEASE update soon!

Wow, This is really good! You portrayed Jack and Gray really well! I can't wait to see what happens when Claire arrives. Overall I give this an A! Update soon please:)

Hurry up and update this is a good story so far.

xD I was laughing so hard when Gray started to blush and when they both started giggling. Good first chapter, and I look forward to more since I'm a HUGE Gray/Claire fan, so don't disappoint me, kay! Ah, a little curious as to why the final couple lines were all in italics, but that aside, nice story!