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S. Kou. Ai
2003-07-02 . chapter 1
it was sad !_! crying
Silens
2002-10-15 . chapter 15
Wow! That was beautiful. ::start getting tears in her eyes:: *sniff* I love your story. It's so sad and romantic at the same time. You should write another one like this. I'll be looking out for more!! Ja Ne!

~Natsumi ^.~v
email me when you do write more!!
Laura
2002-06-29 . chapter 15
Oh, what a sweet story!! I really liked it! Jordan was cool, good job!
Seiya's Rose
2002-05-26 . chapter 14
ooooo i loved this story!!! please tell me if u ever post another one! ^.^
*Sailor Star Seeress/Pisces*
2002-05-21 . chapter 14
Dear Angel of Reality,

World of Music and Confusion was an absolutely wonderful story. I can't
seem to understand why a writer like you, with so much talent, would feel
that they're not good enough or not "popular" enough to post. I know you
wanted a lot of reviews, and that's normal for most people when they first
post, but you really shouldn't expect a lot of reviews. I also noticed that you
mentioned that CSF gets a lot of reviews. CSF's also been writing for quite
a while now too, so I think it's the fact that she's a well known writer that
gets her some of her reviews. I know I always check out her stories
because I know a lot of her stories already and I like reading them. But
that's not the point. Put your stories upbecause they touch people like
me! I know I'm going to add your story to my favorite stories, and I'm
sure there are a few others who are going to do the same.

But enough of that. What I really want to tell you is how
wonderful your story is. I LOVED your story. It was very well written.
You chose just the right songs to put in and you put them in
perfectly. The plot was slightly confusing at first, but made perfect
sense later. I liked the Jordan thing a whole lot. It added someone
to sacrifice their life for Seiya, as Mamoru had done for Usagi. It made
the story bittersweet, a perfect atmosphere for the way you wrote. The
way you showed Seiya and Usagi's feelings was done fine and it was
especially nice to weave those feelings into the songs and make them
fit the characters in the way they did. To tell you truthfully, I'm
impressed. (And I'm usually not easily impressed in fic matters, so
that's saying a lot! LoL) Not a lot of U/S writers (including me
sometimes) start off a story without immediate focus on Usagi and
Seiya and still have it endup good and intriguing, so I liked that a lot.
And the detail of the spaceship was good, as well as the themes of
each chapter (the wholesongfic thing). Plus, you killed off Mamoru nicely,
so good for you!Some U/S writers are just vicious with that (I admit! Me
too sometimes,although I never really killed him off). And overall, I like
the mood of the fic. It was angsty but it had a very sweet ending.

Good job Angel of Reality! Please keep writing! You have a talent
that should not be wasted, and KNOW that you do have fans out there,
even if they do not always review. I'm looking forward to reading your
other fics and I hope to see many of them! LoL. But if you ever feel
like talking to a fellow writer who likes your work, don't hesitate to email
me. Ja ne!
Cassandra Sisenta or Krey-Zey
2002-05-21 . chapter 14
this fic is really over?
well what else can is say except that that it is a wonderful musical experience. thank you for writing this.
when's the new seiya-usagi fic coming out?
eatsyourface
2002-05-20 . chapter 14
Lovely Ending..... *sniff* Poor Jordan-sama....
Is 'lovely Ending' a good enough review? *ducks brick sent her way by Angel*
Ok. Excellent ending!!!
eatsyourface
2002-05-20 . chapter 13
Oooh..... a 'cheesy' chapter.... Excellent Angel! I'm glad, like Cassandra-san, that there isn't any Mamo-bashing here....(-.-; Thought I MAY have bashed him a few times with out realizing it). Update soon or face the wrath of ME!
Cassandra Sisenta or Krey-Zey
2002-05-19 . chapter 13
ne...i don't think its too cheesy. i think it's actually kind of nice.
finally, a fic that doesn't make mamoru a bad guy. it just sucks with the other fics that make him look so bad. i'm pro-seiya but i don't think mamoru wouldn't do something as bad as that.
hmm, about your new fic...i can't really think of a good title. maybe later.:) i'll think about it.
eatsyourface
2002-05-07 . chapter 12
Excellent Chapter!
Update this too Angel.
CSF
2002-05-06 . chapter 12
I downloaded the song..*sniff* and listened to it while I read.....KAMI THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!

Seiya: *hands her a tissue*

thank you...*blows nose* just BEAUTIFUL!
Cassandra Sisenta or Krey-Zey
2002-05-04 . chapter 11
moooooooooore!!
eatsyourface
2002-05-03 . chapter 11
Angel, are you going to update this soon?!?!
eatsyourface
2002-05-01 . chapter 10
*is waiting 'patiently' for the next chapter*
Seiya's Girll
2002-04-27 . chapter 10
hehe....very cute lil' chapter Angel! write more soon kiddo!
*~*Seiya and Usagi forever*~*---Seiya's Girl
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