Good to know Fenris can be happy when he tries. Hopefully this will become a regular thing...

Thank you for sharing once again hun

Naomi xxx

The thought of Carver married and to the Cousland and Hero of Fereldan... Well I never.

Good to see him happy for once even if he is now married to another strong woman. However for him to have been promoted shows he's not been idle himself lol.

A lovely episode.

Thanks for sharing

Take care

Naomi xxx

It's nice to see Carver liking his life. Thanks.

mmm, long haired boys in the rain... *evil cackle*

rofl! oooh I've had an utterly crap couple of days and this had me almost falling out of my chair laughing. Thank you :-D

Awww, I'm not sure why but this chapter made me all warm and fuzzy :-D

Beautifully written. Emotional and about time. Still feel for Seb but hey what the heck.

Thank you for sharing honey.

Happy writing. Take care

Naomi

I've read these last few entries all at one go. I'm really enjoying poor Sebastian's torment. That probably says bad things about me as a person, but you convey it well in your shorts.

I'm looking forward to more angst for Sebastian and, of course, more Anders.

Wonderful, very hot. Thanks.

Brilliant, I was a bit miffed when they didn't finish the scene. I needn't have worried though because you did it for them and, I daresay, that you did every bit as good (probably better) as they could have. On my previous review and your comment upon it, I dislike Sebastian as well and completely concur with the sentiment that he was placed in the game specifically to annoy you.

Oh, that was lovely.

I feel like I should say more, but really that's it.

Oh, gods. Just beautiful.

Oh Sebastian! I keep wanting to romance/rivalmance Seb but then Anders professes his love and I just can't break his heart! I think you've captured Sebastian really well in this short.

Oh dear, Seb reminds me so much of Alistair its unreal. I feel for him I really do, however, unlike the dlc, he really needs to decide whether he wants a woman or something to worship.

He's a man of the world and therefore can't expect a woman to just share his life spiritually unless they are of the same mind and Hawke definitely isn't.

This is very interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing where this will lead.

Thank you hun

Naomi

I love (LOVE) the way you write Fenris. Its just so, smug and knowing and laconic and spot-on.