this kinda sucks but good job

That was very good. i liked the ending. I like wirting about zombies myself, but I'm not so good at it. I especially loved the ending!

you know fanfiction has a sister site where you can make original works?

Zombie Powder isn't about actual zombies -_-

And this site isn't for original works of fiction.

Hi! Just a quick tip

If you want to submit original fiction, (as in, in your own universe like your summary said this was), you should do so at .net. It's a site exactly like this, only for original fiction instead of fan fiction.