RUSHED/ i STILL LOVE IT. THOUGH.

Absolutely loved it! Thanks for sharing this. I'm a big sparky shipper, so very pleased to see this! Excellently written!

All I can say is: I absolutely love it, thanks!

That was fantastic, thank you!

Really enjoy the way you have re-woven the tale, using the main events as we know them but re-inserting Elizabeth where she should have been all along. Looking forward to seeing how you choose to tie up the end.

And don't feel bad over using EatG for multiple chapters - there was A LOT that happened in that episode, enough for a two or three parter!

That was great! Thank you.

So far so good! I love when we get to see John as a father (or in this case, to be), it's such an adorable side of him. Normally I'm not a Shweir fan, as I just don't see the connection. I prefer Sheyla, myself. But you've written it very well. Can't believe poor John doesn't get to see his son come into the world! Figures the universe would play him like that.

I was confused at the beginning. I thought the missing woman was Elizabeth, but I'm guessing now that it's Teyla? What have you done to her? P

nice

Great story, keep it coming, but don't leave us in suspense...

:O

OMG.

:O

Oh dear, I hope Elizabeth's okay. Good Story

Good story. Sweet.

Lol about the mission report! Great chapter! More please!

Very sweet!

LOL! so cute! i want more!