Reviews for Can't You See Something Is Wrong
Guest 4/27/13 . chapter 20
UPDATE PLEEEEEAAAASSEEEEEE? I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENSSS! PLEEASE PRETTY PLEASE WITH FRANCE ON TOP (that was wrong XD)
Escilea 3/26/13 . chapter 20
I love this!
KitsuneMagic48 8/2/12 . chapter 20
No no thank you for writing.
Guest 7/16/12 . chapter 20
Awwww, America and Russia are so cute together! X3
Plz update soon cuz I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Lizzy
Seven of Clubs 7/14/12 . chapter 6
He was so focused on his workout that he worked out for six hours instead of six, and afterwards he had a quick shower.

The only inconsistency I can find, great job writing. :3
A 5/2/12 . chapter 20
This is an awesome story, and I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Hey 3/29/12 . chapter 6
Quick mistake I noticed:

"He was so focused on his workout that he worked out for SIX hours instead of SIX, and afterwards he had a quick shower."

Six instead of six? But hey, only mistake I've seen! 8D
In The Mix 11/20/11 . chapter 20
It's nice to see Russia cares. Poor America! I'm glad he's getting better. I really do hope this isn't gen and will lead to RusAme even if it is minor.

Please UPdate soon!
The Voices Talk to Me 10/17/11 . chapter 13
Well, come on now, I'm pretty sure that there are some pretty strong kittens out there. Somewhere
kitten 6/5/11 . chapter 20
Awww... I love America and Russia! And this seems like something that could happen to America. I mean with everybody calling him fat, it was pretty much bound to happen. I hope you update soon!
kitten 6/1/11 . chapter 20
Awww... I love America and Russia! And this seems like something that could happen to America. I mean with everybody calling him fat, it was pretty much bound to happen. I hope you update soon!
Germerica 5/17/11 . chapter 20
Holy crap... I should be asleep right now... but holy crap. I couldn't stop reading! I've been wanting to do something like this for a while... but I'm sooo glad you beat me to the punch! The only thing that bothers me is the constant change in narroration. Narraration? Whatever. Anywho, this story is awesome! Keep up the excellent work!
Heartless-are-squirrels 3/28/11 . chapter 20
love it
MasterCrowe 3/26/11 . chapter 20
:O Hi again! You updated!

lol Insecure Russia.

Poor Canada. He's probably wasted away to nothing at all with no attention.
dustbunniehailey 3/24/11 . chapter 20
Hmmm...interesting...can't wait for a new chapter even thru you just updated...but i just found your story so i can't wait to read more!
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