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| Reviews for the universals secret |
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   Yeah Her 5/16/13 . chapter 1This is really good! Please update soon! |
| DusksDarkness 11/28/12 . chapter 5 Cute story. Your chapters are a bit short and could use a bit more detail, but the idea is good and clear. I'm interested in seeing how something like this might turn out. I hope you continue. |
| Fennendra 10/29/12 . chapter 5 i just started 2 read this and i hope that u will update soon. |
| DeadPiccolo 10/23/10 . chapter 3 Hurry up! Plz! |
| DiamondDragonFrost 10/22/10 . chapter 1 It's a bit rushed. Try to add more detail and make it longer. I think your title should be 'The Universal's Secret'. It's a cool idea. Dia |
| Loony-1995 10/22/10 . chapter 3 Good story so far :) Just wish there was more in each chapter. |
| Auburn Waves 10/1/10 . chapter 3 You need to make the chapters longer, but this is good. |
| k8yxx 9/20/10 . chapter 3 I wonder wat happens next...?I hope u update soon. Wat will the trustees ask Connie? Cn u plz make the chapters a bit longer. Tx |
| k8yxx 9/20/10 . chapter 2 What happens next? I like this so far but u cud make the chapters a bit longer. Hp u update soon |
| Angelmail 9/20/10 . chapter 3 nice :D still liking it, but your chapters are a little short, you could make them a bit longer :) Angelmail x |
| Angelmail 9/16/10 . chapter 1 like it so far, hoep you update soon :) Angelmail x |
| k8yxx 9/16/10 . chapter 1 Nic3 idea. I wonder where ur taking this story. Hp u update soon T |
